Solid percussion. Could use some more variety but is mixed really well. Great use of pads. The melodies need some work however. Ex. - The piano at 0:57 and the progression at 1:08 are both unappealing. That aside, it's mixed well and is enjoyable to listen to.
If I had to suggest anything: Take more time to create melodies. Don't stop when a melody sounds "good enough" - it can usually get much better. Don't be afraid to switch synths. I honestly didn't like the piano very much. But the synth at 2:16 was great!
Stick to the creativity. The intro was really cool!